Monday 20 April 2009

20/4/09

Today, Poppy and I finally completed our film. We adjusted the voiceovers slightly to make the voices more clear. We also had to use a still image rather than a clip of the writing on the balloon because we found that the clip was very quick and the writing on the balloon was difficult to read. Therefore, we froze the clip and made it into a still image to make it easier to read.

We also made a questionnaire for our target audience when we show our production to about 10 people and get feedback. By doing this questionnaire we hope to find out where we went wrong and how we could have improved. We are hoping to show our production to 10 people tomorrow and analyse the feedback. We will then be able to do an overall evaluation of our production.

Laura Knapp

As Laura has said, we have now completed our film. The deadline for the whole production is the 24th, which is this Friday. We will hand out our questionnaires once the selected people have viewed the film. We will try choose people within our selected target audience, and try to make the selection as unbiased as possible to ensure that we get a good range of views of the film. We will take the comments that are made into account and evaluate them to see how we could make our Thriller opening better.

Poppy Smyth