Good eyeline match - this shows that the shots were framed perfectly, and that the camera was placed at the right level so that the audience feel connected to the characters.
Louder voiceovers needed - this shows that the music was too loud and that we might have to lower it a bit more, when the voiceovers were being played. We know this, but it was really difficult to record voiceovers as we had to, literally, try over and over agian, because they kept going wrong.
Make storyline understandable - we believe that the storyline was understandable, but then this is rather biased as we think our production is rather good, and so cannot give an unbiased opinion.
Make soundtrack louder when there is no speech - making the soundtrack louder would enable the audience feel more involved in the film, rather than them straining to hear it, the sound would engulf and draw them into it.
Be more articulate during speech - we disagree with this point. We feel that the words that were spoken suited the thriller opening, and that any other sort of speech could ruin it.
Soundtrack slightly disjointed - this is a valid point, the soundtrack did not completely go together, some parts of it were a bit disjointed in that the mood within the music, changed very quickly. And sounds that were mellow and quiet, suddenly went to being quite loud and angry.
More variety in visual effects to create interest - this is a fair point, however, we feel that if we were to put any more visual effects in, it would somewhat ruin the production. Visuals are used in it to make it interesting, but if we used any more then it would just be over the top.
